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Here is a view of my penmanship, yesterday I posted a topic but the comments were saying that is was pen small. So I decided to pen a poem & alphabet with big letters. I'm not used to writing large words I'm do my best work writing small. Tell me what you think of it. Thanks

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I like the looks of the poem. The letters have a very nice shape and are spaced well. It's very easy to read. I think, however, and this is personal opinion, that your ascenders for such characters as your h, b , and l for example are too high. Your ascenders for t and d are more in proportion.

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Here is a view of my penmanship, yesterday I posted a topic but the comments were saying that is was pen small. So I decided to pen a poem & alphabet with big letters. I'm not used to writing large words I'm do my best work writing small. Tell me what you think of it. Thanks

Very nice!

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Very nice; your spadework & time practicing are obvious.

 

I'm glad TedF made it clear that it was his personal opinion re your ascenders.

 

You have developed a personal style which is the privilege of every accomplished craftsman (or woman). Now that you have achieved a flowing, regular and readable hand, you're entitled to make it personal as you have done.

The prizes of life are never to be had without trouble - Horace
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